| The shadow angel *part 1* | |
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What do you think of my first script? | its cool! | | 60% | [ 3 ] | its ok | | 20% | [ 1 ] | its bad | | 0% | [ 0 ] | its horrible | | 20% | [ 1 ] |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 2:37 pm | |
| (this is my first movie script ever so its not the best but you know i thought of an idea. btw i dont have all the character names so im using some sg08 user names.) Igna: *is walking through forest with his sister* "so Pizza why did you ask me to come here? Pizza: " I asked you to come hhere beacause a saw a dark angel." Igna: *looks at sister* "NOT THIS AGAIN!!! Mom and dad already told you, dark angels dont exist. Pizza: *tear appear in eyes* "Yes they are you just didnt see him!!!" *girl runs off deeper in the forest* Igna: "Sister wait!" *Boy hears his sister scream* "Sister!!!!" *boy runs after his sister* Soda/Dragon: "Where is he?!" (the dragon is holding the girl with his tail) Pizza: "I dont know who your tlaking about!" Soda/Dragon: *looks at girl evily and tightens his grip* "DONT PLAY DUMB!!! Now, where is the dark angel? Igna: *runs in the clearing with the dragon and his sister* "PUT MY SISTER DOWN!!!!!" *snowball at the dragon* Sado/dragon: *wipes snowball away and turns on the boy* "You are so dead!!!" *dragon swipes at the boy with his claws only to be stopped by a shadowy blurr* Igna: "what the?!" Pizza: *smiles and watches* *Shadow turns into a boy that looks like a penguin in dark clothes but with wings* Put her down Ml, shes not part of this!" Soda/dragon: "oh no? then how did she know you were a dark angel when she saw you?" *dragons mouth and it gets bright with fire* Dark angel: *whispers in shocked voice* "oh no!" *he turns into a shadow again and appears in front of the girl( Igna: *has been to shocked to speak but now he throws more snowballs at the dragon* Soda/dragon: *breathes fire, but at the trees* "ILL BE BACK!!!!" *dragon drops the girl and flies up into the night sky* Igna: "Sister!!!!" *he runs over to his sister not paying any attention to the dark angel* "wake up! sister wake up!!! Dark angel: *looks at the girl turns around and disapears* to be continued...... | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 2:56 pm | |
| lol you just reminded me i made a "Submit your own script section" im moving it there | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 2:57 pm | |
| ok, as long as i dont have to do it again (i had to re type some stuff) | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 2:59 pm | |
| wait a minute, you RETYPED that? you could just copy the original one and paste it here | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:04 pm | |
| no! i did copy and paste but i had to re type names and some stuff was cut off so i re typed some smaller stuff | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:05 pm | |
| ooo thats stinks | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:07 pm | |
| ya wel i have it now som im fine...anyway plz comment saying wat u think of the script and try to give pinters and tips | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:09 pm | |
| srry but i dont make scripts when i make a movie i just make up scripts in my head | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:11 pm | |
| ummm dude ive seen ur yt channel u have one vid..and its a camp rock vid...lol anyways we r getting off topic | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 3:13 pm | |
| no i have more vids that that i just made it on number 1 so everybody could see it.. idk why you couldnt see it | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/19/2010, 4:05 pm | |
| i havent been on yt recently in fact not once this past 3 or 4 days | |
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igna6750plusCP Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-17 Location : Servers Sleet and ROFLOL> Map> Igna6750 Prouctions roof.
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/24/2010, 9:19 pm | |
| AMAZING!!!!! I love this script!!! You put me in! | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/24/2010, 9:48 pm | |
| lol..hmm r u a member or non member? if ur a non member maybe u could be like some...person standing around.......idk......cause i need a member to play the dragon king/dragons, the girl, the girls bro but im already the shadow angel (thx for saying the comment) | |
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igna6750plusCP Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-17 Location : Servers Sleet and ROFLOL> Map> Igna6750 Prouctions roof.
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/24/2010, 9:51 pm | |
| im a member. | |
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Sodaguy08 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : Club Penguin
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/24/2010, 10:16 pm | |
| LOL I JUST noticed it says Soda/Dragon and the sad thing is i cant do it im not a member | |
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igna6750plusCP Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-17 Location : Servers Sleet and ROFLOL> Map> Igna6750 Prouctions roof.
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/25/2010, 5:46 am | |
| But, wasn't there a Non-Member Dragon Costume? | |
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Dinoboyzach2 Administrator
Join date : 2010-02-16 Age : 26 Location : 552 ninja st. the house thith dino production roof
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 2/25/2010, 3:14 pm | |
| ya in the code catalog......igna im gonna send u a pic of wat the boy will look like in the beggining..if u can dress like him then ill think about putting u in the movie! im making the trailer right now | |
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Ml20 Newbie
Join date : 2010-05-29 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The shadow angel *part 1* 5/29/2010, 5:59 am | |
| wow awsome script dude, it's so mysterious | |
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